I just typed up the press release from class. (Belle, Natalie had us edit the press release in class today. ) Add comments ect.....let me know what you think.
Indulge Your Fashion Cravings with Decadence
City College of San Francisco celebrates 10 years of fashion education with its annual student produced fashion show.
San Francisco, CA, May 22, 2011- ALLURING.ENTICING.TEMPTING. Spend your Sunday evening savoring the latest indulgent fashions. City College of San Francisco is back with its annual spring fashion show, returning to where it all started, the majestic Ruby Skye.
The Fashion Department of CCSF is recognized for professional excellence in design, fashion, and business. As one of the few student-priduced fashion shows in California, Decadence is a collaborative effort among the students in fashion show production, fashion design, and graphic communication. This year also features a new and exciting component to the CCSF Spring Fashion Show: one winning senior designer will be awarded a scholarship to the Academy of Art University.
Rendezvous with us at 6pm for hous d'oeuvres and a chance it win one of our fabulous raffle prizes. The fashion show event begins at 7pm. Tickets are $10 for sudents with ID and $15 for general admission. All proceeds from the show will benefit the City College of San Francisco's Fashion Department.
For more information about the City College of San Francisco Fashion Department and Decadence visit the website
ccsf.edu/fashion, or contact Natalie Smith, CCSF Fashion Show Production Instructor, at natalie.smith@macys.com or (415)393-3624
Fact Sheet
Event: "Decadence" City College os San Fancisco's 10th
Annual Fashion Show
Theme: "Decadence" A sunday night of indulgent fashions
featuring romantic florals, military-inspired looks, 70's
flashbacks, and etherial garments.
Overview: The CCSF annual fashion show is a student produced
event held each spring showcasing student designers
and drawing an audience of over 1000 guests. This years
fashion show feature a new component. It will feature
three senior collections. The student with the winning
collection will be awarded with a scholarship from the
Academy of Art University. The proceeds from this event
will go back to the CCSF Fashion Department to fund
future events and activities.
Benefitting: CCSF Fashion Department
Coordinated by:CCSF Fashion Show Production Class
Location: Ruby Skye, 420 Mason St, San Francisco, CA 94012
Date: Sunday, May 22, 2011
Reception and Raffle at 6:00pm
Fashion Show at 7:00pm
Tickets: $10.00 for students with ID
$15.00 for general admission
Sponsored by: Ruby Skye, Macy's, Island Creative,
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Hi Rhe... This reads great except couple grammatical and typo errors.
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting!
Cheers!
Hi Rhea-
ReplyDeleteCan you spell check the Press Release, I am sure you already have right? Also, "Decadence" in quotation marks when mentioned in paragraph 2.
For Fact Sheet:
I suggest this revised "Overview":
The CCSF annual spring fashion show is a student-produced event showcasing the work of student designers and drawing an audience of 1000 guests. As an exciting component to this years event, three senior designers will present collections for a chance to win a scholarship to the Academy of Art University.
(Delete part regarding proceeds from "overview." No need to mention twice as we provide a "benefiting" info next.)
Thanks Again,
Larice
ok, yeah. I checked it after I posted it. I am just waiting for Natalie to send me an updated list of sponsors and I will send her the final.
ReplyDeleteRhea-
ReplyDeleteCan you also send me a word doc of the Press Release and Fact Sheet once it is ready for Natalie? I would like to include it in our sponsorship proposal to Brock Roney, GM at Sunglass Hut. (I have sent him the pitch letter already).
I was hoping to email him by tomorrow. Thanks Rhea!